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I'm Sorry |
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HM3 Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 169TX |
I'm sorry I haven't been a better friend for you I'm sorry that I'm never sure of what I should do I'm sorry I can't take away all the times you've seen me cry I'm sorry I haven't an answer for all the where's and why's I'm sorry that you see me when I'm down and out And when you say you love me I still have some doubts I'm sorry I'm not the mountain that I wanted you to see I'm sorry I'm not to you what you are to me < !signature--> Work like money doesn't matter, love like you've never been hurt, dance like nobody's watching... [This message has been edited by HM3 (edited 12-29-1999).] |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
I'm a little sad. I forgive you! That's how it touched me and I don't even know you. Paul |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
The sentiment here is precious...sad, as well. |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
This is touching, have you shown this to the person it was written for (if it was written for soemone)? ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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HM3 Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 169TX |
This is a vintage poem from 1983 and I don't recall if the person it was written about actually saw it, however I wrote it for Me. Selfish? Work like money doesn't matter, love like you've never been hurt, dance like nobody's watching... |
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Tamera Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 121 |
Touching, sad...very good! |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
So sweet and sincere....you wrote to yourself...I don't think it's selfish...you are just telling yourself you are sorry!! I can completely and totally relate to that...do remember though, forgiveness should always come after the apologies!! Take Care Bridgette |
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