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PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

0 posted 2000-01-28 04:12 PM

If I ever need an answer
I look into your eyes
To see into forever
Like looking at the sky

Bow my head in humble praise
And kneel before you
Offer up anything I have
And give my love to you

Time seems to magnify
As we go through so much
Only deepens the bond
Of hearts when we touch

They say that stars revolve
Around the moon in the night
Just as I am with you
And burn from your fiery light

No tricks that time can employ
Will ever our love destroy

RainbowGirl
Member Elite

since 1999-07-31

Posts 3023
United Kingdom

1 posted 2000-01-29 07:08 PM

JML: You sound like a contender for my challenge, this is so romantic..

HUGS

Memories give you the power to collect roses in the winter...

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2000-01-29 07:15 PM

JML-
Another perfectly beautiful, romantic poem.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

JOY 14
Senior Member

since 1999-09-22

Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

3 posted 2000-01-30 12:05 PM

"They say that stars revolve
Around the moon in the night
Just as I am with you
And burn from your fiery light"

(My fav. verse.)

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

4 posted 2000-01-30 12:59 PM

This poem definitely strikes at romantic heartstrings.

Gene
Senior Member

since 2000-01-23

Posts 935
Colorado, USA

5 posted 2000-01-30 01:23 PM

This is my fav, Joy:

"If I ever need an answer
I look into your eyes
To see into forever
Like looking at the sky"

Yes, love is infinite, JML.
Very nice.
~Gene

kitkat
Senior Member

since 2000-01-11

Posts 878
Nova Scotia

6 posted 2000-01-30 03:59 PM

another lovely piece JML. you are such a romantic. Lucky is the lady in your life.

PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

7 posted 2000-02-01 09:46 AM

Wow, you guys humble me. And now I wish in high school, I would have used love letters I wrote for friends, for myself. But I just gave away bunches being too shy. 13 years later, I am over that. *S*
What was your challenge RainbowGirl?
Thanks again.

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

8 posted 2000-02-01 09:49 AM

Yes, I agree, this is soooooo romantic! Simply wonderful, JML!
Denise

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

9 posted 2000-02-01 10:15 AM

Oh so wonderfully romantic

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

10 posted 2000-03-28 04:06 PM

Bow my head in humble praise
And kneel before you
Offer up anything I have
And give my love to you

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They say that stars revolve
Around the moon in the night
Just as I am with you
And burn from your fiery light

-----------------

on your knees offering...what more could a girl ask for...(smile)
very romantic and devoted...
lucky girl...
stalking you always,
your jm

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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11 posted 2003-01-01 04:57 AM

*smiling*

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