»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #5
»
Breathing
| Open Poetry #5 |
|
Breathing |
|
|
Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL 
|
Sitting Contemplating Feeling words sting But don't mind the pain It goes and comes As quickly as a breath Is inhaled and exhaled. Standing Knowing that presence But not saying a word. They don't come As easily as the breathing Merely consisting of Inhale and exhale. Wanting Aching for kiss Forbidden Inhaling Exhaling Danger lurks Beneath careful covering Swept by the momentous Unearthed secrets Of love. Ignite The dying flame With fuel Made of friendship's honest passion. Exhale old stale passion, Like ridding of rot Left behind by old meat. Inhale the purified contents, Fresh longing Severing ties To reality's fate. Crisp need Keeps Passion firm. NOW Inhale promises a quickening heart Exhale leaves behind contentment. I am happy again if but a moment. Don't gain my affections and cover my eyes. In blindness I will only swing harder. |
||
| © Copyright 2000 Jennifer - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Cherish that moment of happiness girl...life's but too short!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
||
|
Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Temptress - this is really well done - a unique style that adds urgency - the way you have placed many words on one line alone... I like! I like!  K'Writing sharpens life; life enriches writing' Sylvia Plath |
||
|
tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Well done temptress...very impressive tracie  |
||
|
Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Thanks so far everyone. I took a chance on posting here. Meant to post in the Pub. LOL!Don't gain my affections and cover my eyes. In blindness I will only swing harder. |
||
Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Temptress- I am glad you posted here. It's those 'little moments'savored that compose a lifetime. This is wonderful. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
||
|
Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Yeah, but you know the Poetry Police will protect you here in this forum.... LOL |
||
|
Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is lovely, Temptress! I was inhaling and exhaling along with the words!! Denise |
||
|
Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
I can feel the need and the urgency in this one. Well done. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
