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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704
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*I wrote this today in a bookstore my friend and I went to where they had Magnetic poetry. We divided up the provided words and this is what I got out of about 50 words - hard work!* ~~~~~ Woman Man Frantic heave these blue moments black languid spray a storm sky whispers mist with only you weak life bitter and they together lather delicate love worship smooth shadow place picture their need then cry like the shot sun above but wind blown want must part 28.01.2000 'Writing sharpens life; life enriches writing' Sylvia Plath |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wow...I think I need to buy myself some of those words  I'd like to buy a noun |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Wonderful writing. And you're definitely an artist, if you can take pieces of magnetic plastic and turn it into something as image-laden and thoughtful as that. Mike |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Berry interesting K... you still do well, even within boundaries! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kamla- The magnetism of this piece pulls us to you. What a talent, young lady. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Kamla, excellent work my friend!!! An Artist indeed sweet butterfly!!! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Awesome, you've blown me away. Excellent piece of work  |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Kamla, Please give me some of your words This is great Liz |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Excellent! I will have to finally break out the set of words that I bought a while ago and see what happens. . . Beautiful. . . --------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wow! You did an excellent job with the words provided. Seems like it would be very hard to do! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I already knew you were amazing. |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Very nice line up of words I can imagine this ain't easy to do, I like it. Thank you The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Ted Reynolds Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 331 |
A great example of how self-demanded limits and rules can frequently expand, rather than contract, poetic creativity. Hence sonnets and vilanelles. But I don't remember such a effective case of voluntarily limiting one's vocabulary. Well done! |
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