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Her Voice
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TomS Junior Member
since 1999-12-18
Posts 32 |
Her Voice Her voice brought Like songbirds singing Like a lover's caress New yearning To again gaze in her eyes Make her laugh End her sighs Shall I just wait patiently Her reply Let precious time pass me by |
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jaxjoy Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 112Texas |
I love this part..."To again gaze in her eyes...Make her laugh...End her sighs" Nice work  |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Don't let that precious time pass you by because that is just what it is...precious! ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Short, but much said and very sweet. Never put off till tomorrow what you should say and do today, you never know if the chance will ever come again. |
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TomS Junior Member
since 1999-12-18
Posts 32 |
Thanks for the comments. Tom |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Lovely words , Dont ever let time go by your heart often is right [This message has been edited by whiskey (edited 12-30-1999).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is a lovely poem, Tom! Denise |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
So tender these words, whether spoken or silently shared. |
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Astraea Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now |
Very lovely. ~Astraea "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness." "Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things." |
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