Open Poetry #5 |
just a little daydream |
Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
I had a dream just the other day we were flying around in my fathers plane. Down to the shore we plunged into the sea found a big old whale asked about a manatee before it could answer heard a whaling ship then tale turned it faded away,the final words that we heard "I really don't want to die today". We banked around some coral right through a school of whispering fish, heard something about an octopus and a whales dying wish. We broke the surface headed straight for the sky, landed on Mars just to watch the stars go by. But the air got thin so we headed home had no problem went through the ozone hole. We were flying around in my fathers plane tip top flip flop here we go again from the top the front drops and dives into the sea and straight up to the moon,be back to earth real soon. Just a little daydream. |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
Shameless Return |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
I enjoyed your daydream...the elements of sea and sky always pull at me, perhaps from my days as a mermaiden. {blink} |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
You have a good imagination! Nathan |
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Astraea Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now |
Very nice. Daydreams are a nice thought. ~Astraea "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness." "Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things." |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Wonderful Day dream, your Imagination must be strong |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Nice daydream! |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Here ya go.... take another glide around..... |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Hey ok, are you sneaking into my daydreams now??? LoL, So close to a few I have had =o) ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
Alot of dreamin going on up here, had to come back to join them. |
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