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Open Poetry #5

my loss

Smore
Member

since 2000-01-24

Posts 67
el paso

0 posted 2000-01-26 09:56 PM

      I was sure it'd be your loss
     I thought you'd be the one to cry
      But now I see its me thats lost
     Since someone new has caught your eye

     I can see you have now moved on
    Yet my heart is still singing your song
     Its words are written inside my head
    Like all the sweet words you'd ever said.

    I always had so much to give
     Yet never took anything from you
    You were my true reason to live
     But now I must find a reason thats new

Tara Simms
Senior Member

since 1999-08-12

Posts 1244
Honea Path, SC USA

1 posted 2000-01-26 10:08 PM

Oh the pain of heartbreak. We've all been there.

poetry_kills
Senior Member

since 1999-12-04

Posts 549
new orleans

2 posted 2000-01-26 10:18 PM

smore: the verse is a little awkward, but heck, we all do that... i like this quite a bit and i hope to see more of you on the forum soon

i can sympathize with your loss and i hope that you will learn and grow from it and not let it eat at you...

sincerely,
jerome the boy with no life

A savage place! as holy and enchanted
As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted
By woman wailing for her demon-lover!
~Coleridge

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