Open Poetry #5 |
Of Love and Hate |
Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
This began as a response to Vampire'sMistress poem "Of Love and Hate". I was e-mailed by Marge who told me it deserved a thread of it's own so here it is. Marge: I want to thankyou for helping me out with the final line. Of love; it's passions sweeter side, It's gentleness like rain. It soothes the hurting part of us, And wins out over pain. Of hate; it's bitter and rebuke, It's passion gone awry. It's hurtful and it does consume, All that is close by. In all we do within our lives, These feelings we must temper. For either left to run amuck, Can kill with just a whimper. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Indeed Marilyn, wise words from a wise lady. Love is the key, hate will never achieve anything only create more problems. (HUGS) from your sister across the sea Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
One whimpering female saying..."wise words indeed" HUGS Feed your dreams with love... |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I can understand hate running amok causing problems but I've never seen the problem of too much love. Nicely written, Marilyn. |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
You definitely speak with wisdom here, Marilyn. Exellent work, with a lot of truth to it. Keep it up! *Krista Knutson* ~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack, Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare, Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water, Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Such wise words my dear friend |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marylin, Well written enjoyed the read. |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Isis...Thankyou my sister. They are words to live by. Rainbow...I understand how you feel. (whimpering myself) Mike...Too much of anything can hurt. Love left umtempered can become obsession and obsession causes as much pain as hate. Krista..Thanks for reading. Ruth...Thankyou for your words my friend. Sy....You are a sweet man and thanks for reading. |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Very good Marilyn.....I enjoyed this one. I think I am back......not sure where I went though. } Robert |
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