Open Poetry #5 |
Until I Die |
G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
Not long ago once upon a time I sat myself down to write out this rhyme About a love that transcends time Tragic yet elegant and so sublime I want to kiss you until I die I have no thoughts or reasons why That in my heart I always cry I just want to kiss you until I die When life is cruel and it's you that it harms I just want to take you into my arms To wipe away the pain and all of the tears And to remove from you your doubts and fears I want to kiss you until I die I have no thoughts or reasons why That in my heart I always cry I just want to kiss you until I die Perhaps a day will come to be When you look around and you will see That our paths were crossed by destiny And that you were meant to be with me I want to kiss you until I die I have no thoughts or reasons why That in my heart I always cry I just want to kiss you until I die I fantasize with a lighthearted sigh About the time with me you will lie I will look you deep straight in the eye And then I will kiss you until I die G.A. Webb |
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Candy Junior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 17 |
i love this poem, Its very sweet. i feel the same way with a person i love very much. good work |
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simplyYRREHS Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 162 |
Such Melody! I adore this poem. Sherry "Heaven is under our feet as well as over our heads." ~Henry David Thoreau |
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One Who Understands Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 251Cedar Rapids, Iowa |
Beautifull poem. I love to read poems that flow so well |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
To have someone feel that way about them must be a wonderful thing!!! |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
Thank you all. I'm glad you liked it. I just wish that I had somebody like that in my life still. Sadly enough I no longer do, but I'm glad to hear that somebody else out there dose. I wish you all the best and thanks again. G |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Wow...... Such love. I was touched deeply. -SEA |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
So much lovely passion. I hope it is yours again. |
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Dolphins3 Member
since 1999-09-30
Posts 135Wisconsin |
G A Beautiful poem. |
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