Open Poetry #5 |
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Fetus (version #1) |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
I hope y'll like the poem. I existed in my mommy's womb, a month after conception. By the end of the second month, my heart was established in four sections. Month three, I excitedly jerked my body and flexed my tiny legs and arms. Month four, I grew some more and now I'm bigger than before. Month five, I growed by a few more inches, as I increased my hearing senses. By month six, I was kicking my mommy's cervix. By month seven, I can taste the sweet food, that mommy's feeding me and I think that I'll become a sugar junkie, once I get out of my mother's body. By month eight, my lungs are steadily increasing, causing to to have an easier time breathing. By the end of the ninth month, I shall be out and ready to experience, first-hand what life is all about. PS. If any of you think I left a lot to be desired, don't worry because, I'm working on a deeper version. Nathan |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Well, you've certainly covered the basics here, Nate. Can't wait to see the deeper version! ![]() Denise |
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Ted Reynolds Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 331 |
Obviously a labor of love! What about calling it simply "The Miracle"? |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
I have to say I'm smiling here because to spend the time makes me think you're in love with children...ok, maybe not but I'm still smiling and LOL @ sugar junkie... ![]() HUGS Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn. |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Thank you Denise, I promise that it will be a good one. Thank you Ted for your nice comments. Thank you Rainbowgirl, for your nice comments also. Nathan |
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