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One Who Understands Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 251Cedar Rapids, Iowa |
Wonders of Life Throughout my life I have learned what I should appreciate. I have learned what I should really focus on. In the process of enduring many struggles and painful situations, I have better understood what to hold on to and what to let go. I understand that some of my initial desires, In the big picture, may not be of real importance. And that certain opinions of people, Are insignificant to dwell upon. I recognize that the point of life is not to compete with others, Is not to have the most money, or the best looking wife. What is most important about life is enjoying it. When it’s all said and done, It will not matter what you have in the bank, Or how many people called you sir. You will look back on life and recall the times you enjoyed yourself. You will count your smiles and not your possessions. So it is better to live life, I believe, By focusing on the enjoyable experiences. And not worrying about my frustrations or difficulties. Because problems are nothing more, Than temporary conflicts that make the good things in life seem more precious. And the good memories and feelings are what stick with you forever. What are you going to be most likely to remember? The time when someone made you feel like ****, Or the time when you made someone feel really good about themselves? Are you going to remember the time when you cried in self sorrow, Or the time when you cried out of the joy in your heart? When you wake up in the mourning do you find yourself dreading the day that awaits? Or eager to find out where you will find yourself emotionally and mentally? I used to look at someone and see what they could improve about themselves, Now I look at them and see the wonder of how they came to be that way, |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Excellent poem and excellent views on life. This outlook will certainly lead to contentment! Well done! Denise |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
I am absolutely basking in the PEACE that I feel generating from this post. I'm so happy you have found it! I found it some years ago and have never been the same since it's amazing! WONDERFULLY WELL DONE |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I wish more people could think like you do. I liked this very much. -SEA |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Wonderful post The Title caught my eye and I'm glad I stopped to read it. You speak a lot of truth Well done Liz |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
One, insightful words, very well expressed. Claire |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wise words indeed from one who understands. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
One Who Understands, beautiful words. you trully are One Who Understands. Parker |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Nothing in life is worth anything unless it can be shared there's no point in having money if you have no one to spend it on it's useless to love if that person is never there no point in laughing if there's no one to hear you and there no feeling worse than holding out your arms and having no one to hug and there's no fun in arguing when there is no reply... Excellent poem HUGS< !signature--> Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn. [This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 01-25-2000).] |
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One Who Understands Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 251Cedar Rapids, Iowa |
Thank you Rainbow girl. You are absolutaly right. And thak you all for appreciating my feelings  |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
These are excellent thoughts, sir. It is always best to dwell on the good that you have to be grateful for and the good that you do for others. Anyone can wallow in pity and anyone can make someone feel like S**t. True happiness comes from dwelling on the positives........this is a good piece of work. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Your name and the post say it all...what a wonderful read. I to am pleased to have read such a wonderfull outlook on life. I'll try to remember to have the same outlook. tracie  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I think you've learned a great deal...could all be so fortunate |
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CrazyChick Member
since 2000-01-05
Posts 132 |
Great work This is a wonderful poem!!! |
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