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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
I wish... I wish my work load would lessen I wish winter would quicken its pace I wish the stars were brighter So I could wish myself out of this place I wish there was an answer To every question that I had I wish that I could dream my dreams And have them come true just like that I wish I could find myself laughing Every single day The tears would finaly dry and completly go away I wish this wishing would make a difference But when it comes to real life... Wishing just won't cut it It's just not a sharp enough knife! Joy "To you, my children, These lovely flowers I give. Prune ye my vines and fig trees, With care my flowerets tend, But keep the pathway open, Your home is at the end." -Robert Frost (from: God's Garden) |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I wish I could tell you how much I liked this.. know what? I can! I liked this a lot.. very clever poetry! And true...  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wonderful poem, Joy! And I wish all those things too!  |
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Anne Member
since 1999-12-31
Posts 78 |
Heart-felt! I like the tone! Great job! |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Joy, You know what? I bet if you wish real hard all those things will come true--"wish" and "Joy"--they go together. ---- Gene |
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