Open Poetry #5 |
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In the moonlight,shadows dancing(thought I'd give it a spin) |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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The kids are in bed What shall it be, a movie, a game, or a dance with me?! I see that twinkle- I know what's on your mind, as you guide me to the porch touching my behind. Slowly you undress me What will the neighbors think? What will they see? ......Softly you say to me......... In the moonlight,shadows dancing........ -SEA- |
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Bad Boy Member
since 2000-01-23
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Oh YEA ![]() Now this is my kind of poetry ![]() If they would let me in the Adult room I would be Oh SO HAPPY ![]() Thank you for the vision. Now I think I`ll go shower ![]() ![]() |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Why thank you Bad Boy.........I think. ![]() |
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Poet deVine
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Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I like this! Romantic..... ![]() |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I enjoyed reading this Sweet and romantic poem, Sea. |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
(taking notes) Yep -- think this would be good -- very good in fact! ![]() --Kess Full fathom five thy father lies, Of his bones are coral made, Those are pearls that were his eyes; Nothing of him that doth fade But doth suffer a sea-change Into something rich and strange... --William Shakespeare, from The Tempest |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
SEA: "What will they see?" The look of love, I think.. ![]() HUGS Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn. |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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YA!Poet, Martie, Skyfyre, SOOOO glad you liked this. Thank you - SEA ![]() |
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Denise
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"Oh, no......hurry up, hide, here come the kids! I thought you said they were sleeping"....hehehehe ![]() This was adoreable, SEA! Challenge well met! Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Well, now dancing in the moonlight naked...that's a new twist on it and one I may perhaps have to try out ![]() Challange well met Sea ![]() |
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Dolphins3 Member
since 1999-09-30
Posts 135Wisconsin |
Great poem SEA , You have to try it in the rain though. LOL ![]() |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sea- This is absolutely adorable ! Tee Hee ... ~Marge~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Enjoyed this one SEA. ![]() |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
SEA....how sweetly romantic!! This was beautiful. What the neighbors think doesn't matter in the face of love. Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream. Shawna R. Holder Boise, Idaho |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
What a lovely romantic poem. Hope you had fun ![]() -------------- You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face and show the world all the love in your heart Then people are gonna treat you better You're gonna find, yes you will That your beautiful as you feel.~~~ Carol King |
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