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Move on once more |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa 
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Somewhat lost, and long misguided weary traveler stops to rest many miles and fears subsided many stories since confessed. a glance upon the road behind brings comfort that as soon departs a road that wasn’t very kind a road that broke so many hearts and traveler with eyes still gleaming holding on, but begging sleep offered up the chance for dreaming into worlds of conscience deep weary traveler resting soundly ’neath the shelter of a tree basks within his thoughts profoundly feeding fruits of memory Paths that he had come across people that had shared their grace dice that he had come to toss challenges he had to face love that he had took for granted times that he had long forgot imaginations he enchanted imaginations he did not miles of footprints in the road brought back in the travelers mind years of honors long bestowed years of life he left behind weary traveler eyes now glowing wonders what he’s resting for and with wind at his back blowing traveler moves on once more. |
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SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Kevin, this is so great! I feel like going for a trek now!  -SEA |
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Wendy Flora Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 182Virginia |
What a beautiful metaphor for life... beautiful and tragic, maybe the more beautiful for its tragedy. Bravo! -wen "Well she wants to live her life, then she thinks about her life... Pulls her hair back as she screams, I don't really want to live this life!" -Train "Meet Virginia" |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Well done! Your words convey the traveling experience wonderfully, been there a time or two. DH |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
You painted the picture in my mind so vividly, Kevin, wonderful tale. Denise |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Kevin, this is VERY excellent. Great thoughts and presented very well. Your talent is expanding very nicely... |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
haha sea, who says you arent on one =) Wendy, sometimes we need to ind the beauty in tragedy Danny, where did you end up ? D, a dreamers pallete? =) Deer, you can only hope to contain me mwahaha =) |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Excellent poetry Kevin! |
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