what goes around comes around (not sure if this one works???)

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Open Poetry #5

what goes around comes around (not sure if this one works???)

fc
Member

since 2000-01-18

Posts 130

0 posted 2000-01-24 09:48 AM

he/I tell(s) me/you
that he/I love(s) me/you
enough to want to be
just friends
if that is all we can be
and I/you say sure
I/you want that too...

but I don't.

not really.

I want to be as far away
from his you don't love me
pain filled eyes
as I can get
and I so have to wonder

[This message has been edited by fc (edited 01-24-2000).]

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

1 posted 2000-01-24 10:08 AM

kind of hard to read but i get what your going for.
Pick one of the two and write from that view and it will be more enjoyable.

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