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Forgive Me
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Another from high school........ Forgive Me I never meant to leave you standing small among the California pines, but the wind was playing in your hair as if the whole world could be found on top of your golden head, and I felt so insignificant that even the winter pine cones were greater than me. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You wrote well even then, Beki... I wish I had started as a teenager... Nice to see you again...  |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Thanks a bunch Nan...I have been writing my whole life, won my first contest when I was 11. And still, I have so much to learn |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is lovely, too, Beki! It says so much with so few words! Denise |
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One Who Understands Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 251Cedar Rapids, Iowa |
Even when you realize that you have made a mistake, it feels good to be able to say it... |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
D E E P DEEP deep |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
A nice poem you did. I know what it feels like to feel small and insignificant, you prosed this so well. The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Thanks everyone, was a little hesitant to post such early work but I am glad I did...perhaps I will post a few more |
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