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Open Poetry #5

I Feel Your Pain

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

0 posted 2000-01-23 10:55 PM

I feel your pain
I see your hurt
I want so much
To quench your thirst
To fix that pain that hurts inside
To hold you, help you ease your mind
To show you love and help you see
You are my one, the world to me
I save these thoughts for you my dear
They are the ones I hold most near
My Heart.

Richard Rendall

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-01-23 11:09 PM

Beautiful poem, Richard!

Denise

tulip
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since 1999-07-04

Posts 320
unknown

2 posted 2000-01-23 11:19 PM

I agree with dsnyder, very beautiful!

Echo Rhayne
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since 1999-09-17

Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA

3 posted 2000-01-24 01:54 AM

Richard, this was beautiful and touching! Whoever t was written for (if anyone) is quite the lucky one!

Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin*

One Who Understands
Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 251
Cedar Rapids, Iowa

4 posted 2000-01-24 02:09 AM

I am reminded of my friend. He has such a kind heart, yet no one to share it with. And I feel him pain. Thank you for this wonderful poem

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

5 posted 2000-01-24 09:45 AM

Thank you Denise, Tulip, echo and one
Sometimes a kind heart suffers more than a cold heart because its so vulnerable yet I wouldn't change the way I am for I can love far more than a cold heart ever will.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

6 posted 2000-01-24 12:12 PM

Oh Richard...this is most romantic. Lovely verse and heart felt thoughts

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

7 posted 2000-01-24 12:36 PM

Thank you hoot
From you I consider it a large compliment.
Richard

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