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Sunshine
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0 posted 2000-01-23 06:41 PM


What Is It?

When you can say what is
on your mind
and know that you're
understood;

When you can cry your
eyes out,
and later hear words
that make you feel good;

What is it that draws
you near
so you know you've
nothing to fear;

When you feel needed,
warm, close
and sincere,

What is it that
makes each day a
little happier and bright,

When you're able
to see things
in a new and different light;

What is it that
you know will
never finish, never end;

not known simply as a
person or being,
but remembered warmly
as a very dear friend.


©KRJ
23 January, 2000
Originally Written 1969



 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow



© Copyright 2000 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2000-01-23 06:44 PM


As true now as it was then.  Lovely poem.
Denise
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2 posted 2000-01-23 06:54 PM


This is so beautifully touching, Sunshine!  
A poem that has certainly stood the test of time. It is timeless, indeed!

Denise

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3 posted 2000-01-23 07:02 PM


Sunshine, my friend-

My stars ! ... your mom let you
write while in the playpen?
You know what they say ...
OUT OF THE MOUTHS OF BABE'S !

Well, BABE ... this is one heck
of a poem.
~*Marge*~




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Bad Boy
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4 posted 2000-01-23 07:08 PM


Because this is a sad kinda piece, Im not going to tell you how much I enjoyed reading it.
Im also not going to tell you that you have done a great job at wording this.
I will tell you that you have a talent for writing.
Very Nice  

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 The Devil Made Me Do It.



[This message has been edited by Bad Boy (edited 01-23-2000).]

Sunshine
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5 posted 2000-01-24 09:30 AM


I had thought this perhaps a bit juvenile to be posting at my age, but I thought...what the heck...

it is so nice to have received such delightful comments on it.  Thank you all.

 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow



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