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In the Moonlight, Shadows Dancing (Hoot's challenge)
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In the Moonlight, Shadows Dancing (Hoot's challenge) |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
In the moonlight shadows dancing Willows weep amid morning mist Lovers sighing sounds entrancing sharing a farewell kiss In the daylight shadows resting While life goes on apace always seeking ways of testing faithfulness in each face In the noontime shadows sleeping Waiting for eventide when nightly secrets she’ll be keeping lovers lie together again In the moonlight shadows dancing Secret trysts again begin whispers taking lovers chancing to find a love again |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
PdV, this is lovely! I loved the last stanza.  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Applauding fervently...wonderful job. Challange well met |
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Bad Boy Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 78 |
I find this a bit romantic  Great job with the wording. Now I have a question. Are we allowed to flirt in here? All theses writing`s of love really is very attractive,put`s even us Bad Boy`s in the romantic mood   < !signature-->The Devil Made Me Do It. [This message has been edited by Bad Boy (edited 01-23-2000).] |
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Anne Member
since 1999-12-31
Posts 78 |
I love that little twist of the shadows being asleep by day and dancing by night! (That's my favorite part anyway!) Nice one! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Much atmosphere created with your words in this poem. I really liked the feeling! |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Oh, this is so lovely, PdV!! Very lovely! Denise |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you all for you kindness! I appreciate you all so much! Bad Boy, yes you are allowed to flirt! Interaction is the best thing about this site.. next to the great poetry..and the wonderful comraderie..and the....well there are so many good things about this site, can't list them all!  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
PdV, wow this is great!! Lovely. What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Awesome PvD ! Just Awesome ! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Poet deVine- Flirting with the moonlight becomes you. I like the images this conjured up. That Hoot gal sure knows how to get us all going, eh? ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Devine I applaud you! Excellent writing! |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
Excellent verse (and not a half-bad way to spend a moonlit evening, either).  Enjoyed, enjoyed, enjoyed! --Kess Full fathom five thy father lies, Of his bones are coral made, Those are pearls that were his eyes; Nothing of him that doth fade But doth suffer a sea-change Into something rich and strange... --William Shakespeare, from The Tempest |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Having read all the responses to Hoot's challenge... I have developed a renewed appreciation for moonlight's dancing shadows and the exceptional talents of the women of Passions... well done Ms. deVine... beautiful work. |
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