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What good is Love?
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What good is Love? |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA 
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What good is love That feels so strong If all your told Is that it’s wrong What good is love Deep in your soul When that love Cannot be told What good is love Kept in a cage It drives you nuts It causes rage What good is love So warm and so true When what you need Is kept from you I do not know the answer to These questions that I’m asking you I only know a love so true Should not be locked away I ask that you Assist me to Find a way To see this through It hurts me so To know your mine Yet that I cannot Have you I’m living now on borrowed time The time that you will give me And if this feeling hurts you I hope that you forgive me I want only to love you The best that I can No hidden moments Just Love Richard Rendall |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Just have faith and everything will fall into place!! Good luck to you dear! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Bad Boy Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 78 |
Very well written. All this talk of love has left me wanting a smoke  take your time and she`ll come around, and if not then mabey she`s not the right one? some time`s we have to do alot of fishing before we catch that perfect fish. good luck  [This message has been edited by Bad Boy (edited 01-23-2000).] |
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freeverse Junior Member
since 2000-01-22
Posts 14 |
good work and good luck.  |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thank you all for the acknowledgement. was a time time but got through it fine and she did finally come around. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful poem, and I'm glad it all worked out in the end! Denise |
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