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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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-belmont's dead- He had a prohlem, But he's okay now. Belmont's dead. Blueheart pills, Medicated satisfaction. Dust & peace. When he asked his wife What loving him was like, She didn't speak. In glowing light The TV screen Gave him the creeps. Looking in the mirror, He wondered what made him Adore glass sheets. The clock told him In minute terms To admit defeat. No final words, Just a final reel Incomplete. Belmont's dead. Grab a cup. Take a seat. Watch him not breathing, Slowly, slowly Watch him reap. His personal best. Breath and sickness, Clouded forgiveness. Watch as Belmont Finds himself In weepless sleep. |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
WoW Mike, this is great! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. I showed it to a girl at work who wanted to see some of my poetry, and she said it creeped her out. That's the point -- thoughts like that can be good sometimes.  I did say sometimes. Thanks for the support.Mike |
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One Who Understands Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 251Cedar Rapids, Iowa |
Good work It amazes me how well you think! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very interesting |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Inspired by a headline in th' newspaper a loooong while back. I was so angsty and silly in mah anger. She said burn ... together. |
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