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Joshua Maxwell New Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 3 |
IMPAIRED CHOICE Born with many years of life, But tapped only a little, Get filled with nothing but strife. For one so young, Dreams of pleasure and delight, Are torn and left unsung. We struggle with the test, And hurtfully so many fail, Just like the rest. All the over powering voices, Make for some difficult choices. With any doubt, Soon you feel without pout. Thrown into the sky, Like a rainbow, shinning high. Suddenly the soul falls so solemn, Until you hit rock bottom. Unsaved as far as you can tell, You're spending now an eternity in hell, As you yearn to glide again, Trusting you'll be closer to Heaven, When lost in the illusion grasp of Satan. |
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Stargazer Junior Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 16Alvordton, OH USA |
This is a beautiful poem! It made me think to understand several of the lines, but that made me enjoy it all the more! |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Joshua, welcome to passions! I hope to read more poems from you soon, this was beautiful! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ |
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One Who Understands Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 251Cedar Rapids, Iowa |
The picture is still in my mind...excellent piece  |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Welcome to Passions, Joshua - We look forward to reading more of your work... Check your email... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
This really has a good message behind it...welcome to passions |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
I agree with just have to agree with all the above! And add my own Welcome! to the bunch!  May I never be too busy to help another's load, Then I'll be drinking from the saucer 'cause my cup has overflowed. --Author Unknown |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, Joshua! Wonderful poem! I look forward to more from you! Denise |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
BRAVO! WELCOME! Hang around here long enough and satan will have no choice BUT to release any grasp. Nice to have you with us. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
WELCOME!! I liked this very much! WE have a spiritual forum also if you have any more such as this, we'd love for you to share them with us there! <*\\\>< Where there is faith, there is love. Where there is love, there is peace. Where there is peace, there is GOD. Where there is GOD, there is no need. Hallmark |
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