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In the moonlight, shadows dancing (Response to Hoot's challenge)
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In the moonlight, shadows dancing (Response to Hoot's challenge) |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion 
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OK - lemme give this a try, too In the moonlight, shadows dancing, Turning smoothly in the night. Toerag's arms furtively romancing, His blow up date that he holds tight. First he tries to do the Twist, She lets out a squeaking moan. Then he steals a sloppy kiss, In his room there all alone. In the moonlight, shadows dancing, Casting reflections on the glass. Toerag's shadow, his belly enhancing, The stumbling profile of his a**. Next he tries to do the waltz, His "date" swings on his arm. It really isn't Toerag's fault, He was raised out on the farm. In the moonlight, shadows dancing, The whoosing sigh is heard too soon. Toerag's date gives a blow glancing, As she sails around the room. heh heh heh - Toe, you really need to talk to Arthur Murray before you take a date home to the overpass. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Hillarious, Mike. Geesh, I was expecting another one of your romantic pieces! You fooled me with this one! Very good! Denise |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Apaulds! This is great Sailor...I think you win first prize!...lmao |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Geesh! You would think with all the times this has happened to Toe, he would stop nibbling on their necks!!! Great (and accurate) response, LngJohn! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
ROFLMAO...well, this definately wasn't what I had in mind when I posted the challange...but thanks for the laugh. Good one  |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You're incorrigible!!! |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
ROFLMAO ! Thanks ! Great poem. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Thank you all, but please hold the applause. Ol' Toe is the one who inspired this romantic poem. I owe him the credit for this tearful story of romance and heartbreak. [This message has been edited by LngJhnAg (edited 01-22-2000).] |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
ok LoL, fooled me up until the 3rd line LoL. hehehe Anyone got a saftey-pin so we can pop Toe's date? ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Love is found in such strange places plastic, paper or mylar faces who are we to judge the way other people choose to play |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I wasn't dancing you damned old sailor! I was shadow boxing with my blow up doll, I guess I got too carried away, when she popped and hollered "foul!" I didn't bite her neck ya see, No it wasn't her neck that blew, I bit off a part of her right ear, Mike Tyson's book on boxing's really cool. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
LOLOL.... Well done LngJhn.... |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Hey there, ya reprobate! yanno, I think I really believe you about the Mike Tyson stuff (your secret's safe with me, Toe). Nice reply, Martie. And its always good to get a compliment from the ever vivacious Pepper. As for you, Toe - well, I guess I gotta get a compliment from you, too - but I don't like it because I always think its a trap (and it always is - lol). |
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