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The Storm |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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Lightening strikes my heart beats faster then comes rain loud like laughter On my face I feel a slap but it was just a thunder clap A deadly voice calls my name it's only the wind but still the same When the storm is through then I'll be free from the weather of feelings so deep in me. -SEA- |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Aye, sometimes weathering the storm of our own emotions is much more trying than any tempest. Excellent work here! |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is fantastic, SEA! Very well done. Those storms can be scarey! Denise |
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One Who Understands Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 251Cedar Rapids, Iowa |
WOW!!! Very to the point...yet ever so clear  Excellent |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Satiate:Thank you, glad you liked it! dsnyder: Those storms rage still.(Thank you for the praise) One Who Understands: Thanks! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Sea...we all have to weather our own storms, but thankfully, like the young ash tree, we bend and do not break At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet. ~Plato |
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