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Brush and Canvas
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Brush and Canvas |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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Brush and Canvas The eyes drop soft canvas the brush moves to explore each valley and rolling hill light and dark stopped frozen defined by each shadow and touch two play as one What is it? Why do you look Away? What tears should you hide from my face? What secrets lie within that brush and paint reveal But I cannot see? The brush finds paint and dips into Blue away from the canvas It paints my love upon you © June 1999 Tyre Olson and Corinne Bailey |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Such strong sentiment and meaning in such few words. Excellent writing. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful, Corinne! You paint such a beautiful picture!  Denise |
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One Who Understands Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 251Cedar Rapids, Iowa |
I'm left in ahw! So wonderfully thought out  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Corinne...Picasso has nothing on you |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne- I chanced to see this 'masterpiece' and judged it Best Of Show ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you all, you are too kind. Corinne |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Corinne, your poetry paints such wonderfull images. I really loved this piece. Parker |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
...another masterpiece... |
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