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The Eternal Beauty of Rain
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The Eternal Beauty of Rain |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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Soft drops fall from the heavens, Caressing my window sill. How I long to have such freedom, To come and go at will. To be cherished so much, Never knowing when An appearance will come. When finally it does, Being loved for the beauty Not won, but possessed. A single drop contains The power to cause Such wanting… Wanting of something- We cannot control, Cannot hold. The eternal Beauty Of the Rain. Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
Beautiful...raindrops, like tears, do not last forever. And even though associated with sorrow, can be so beautiful. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Devina! I can sense deep longing in this! Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Beautiful  |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Oh so beautiful! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Rain has always filled me full of happiness.I have never felt sadness in the rain, only power,wonder and excitement!The freedom comes when you run out and play in the rain,knowing you are going to get soaked!-SEA |
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One Who Understands Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 251Cedar Rapids, Iowa |
Looking at something as small and insignificant as rain is such a wonderful way to express yourself. It really makes one think Beautiful |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Thanks to you all, I started out just admiring the rain outside, it's sooo beautiful!! But I guiltily got my emotions wrapped in the midst!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Love the rain! (As long as I'm inside! LOL) Beautiful Devina! |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
devina, you are such a versitile poet. This one has many depths I feel. Parker |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
Christopher, you don't know what you're missing! devina, this was lovely -- rain is one of my single most favorite types of weather, and it has as many moods as I do. Ever think about the fact that rain, like love, is only real in the falling? --Kess Full fathom five thy father lies, Of his bones are coral made, Those are pearls that were his eyes; Nothing of him that doth fade But doth suffer a sea-change Into something rich and strange... --William Shakespeare, from The Tempest |
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Sonny Junior Member
since 1999-12-18
Posts 29Schenectady, NY, USA |
Devina - this was absolutely beautiful. The way you captured the essence and gave it such powerful emotional qualities was truly amazing. Personally, I'm not too fond of rain...it's alright when I'm inside. The sounds of the rain, however, I do find soothing. Sonny |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Ohmigosh- I'm graced by Christopher's presence!! LOL!!! You're praise is always worth the wait!!! James- Thanks to you sweetie...versitile meaning here and in adult???  he heKess- I couldn't agree with you more...the rain is beautiful and romantic, mainly when you're actually OUTSIDE in it...all these whining males staying indoors!!!LOL Sonny- thanks for the read, always appreciate it! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Devina, Very beautiful, indeed! Liz |
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