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The sea and me
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The sea and me |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia 
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The sea and me When the rain falls it lands tenderly upon the shore When the waves roll in they reveal memories galore The rain, seawater and the sand make me feel at peace inside They help to wash my thoughts of you away with the tide Thoughts of you and I alone on the beach one perfect night Alone and in love holding each other tight But now I'm all alone you've gone to a higher place And in my heart I'm broken and our love I'll not replace You were my one and only no other could there be So here I am alone let the water set me free [This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 01-20-2000).] |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
This was very sad but well written. It sounds as if you lost someone. If that is the case, I'm sending you a hug. You aren't alone in that area. Don't gain my affections and cover my eyes. In blindness I will only swing harder. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Dear Temptress I don't know why I wrote this it just happened. Yes it is sad isn't it. Thanks for your reply and comments they were much appreciated. Tracie |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Sad indeed and I'm makes us weep Everytime we read It's always hard to figure out if a poem is writen based on fact's (most of them are) or fiction. If it was just happened or it's years back. So I try to look at the poem as a poem, but yes it's not easy to do. To leave emotions out of it, i mean. After all that's what poetry is all about. Well at least for me. A very nice piece and yes a hug form me just in case The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Very sad indeed... and well written.  |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Messages from the sea.... always enthrall me... Welcome to Passions, Tracie... Check your email... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Hauntingly sad , but in turn beautiful. Welcome to passions |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
"The rain, seawater and the sand make me feel at peace inside".... The sea does that for so many of us... Welcome!! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sadly beautiful. I'm sorry for your loss. Welcome to Passions, Tracie! Denise |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
This was really good, though sad. DH |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
Anything with the sea and you got me. Even if it's a bit sad. WELCOME HOME! |
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One Who Understands Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 251Cedar Rapids, Iowa |
You have come to the right place...God bless. Beautiful poem |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Sorry for your loss , Very sad poem  Welcome to passions |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
To all you wonderful people who read my poem and replied I thank you. I've been busy so hadn't checked my mail I'm sorry. tracie and once again thanks |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Set with grace and saddness. Welcome to PassionsI used to be schizophrenic, but we're ok now so don't make me mad cause I'm running out of places to hide the bodies......LOL |
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Bad Boy Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 78 |
Very well written and yes very sad as well. Welcome to passion. The loss of a loved is always hard. I wish you the best.  The Devil Made Me Do It. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Dear First Knight & Bad boy Thankyou for both taking the time to read my poem. Your comments were welcoming and I thankyou both. Tracie |
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