Open Poetry #5 |
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Deception |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
My denial of reality is my beauty, but also my disappointment in life. I expect the perfection to surpass every thing, every breathe we take. I dream, and fall, into deception. I've lived up to your expectation, But continue to decieve myself. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Tulip, this is great! enjoyed the read. ![]() What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
HEY!! Do I know you?? Have we met?? Are you me?? LOL! I was asking because this is how I am. I refuse to accept what others see as reality. This one hit the target nicely with its truth. Thanks for the read. Don't gain my affections and cover my eyes. In blindness I will only swing harder. |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
Your welcome, temptress, and thank you dark angel! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I enjoyed this too, Tulip! Very well done! ![]() Denise |
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One Who Understands Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 251Cedar Rapids, Iowa |
I can definitaly relate. What a great way to sum up the feelings of presure of an individual...only to face dissapointment and emptiness...thank you for sharing this piece ![]() |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
Thanks dsnyer & one who understands!! Hopefully one day I'll find someone that lives up to my own expectations....Is it possible? |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Yowsers...this one packs a whollop!!! |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
Thanks hoot! |
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