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fc Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 130 |
an empty box folded unnaturally forced to be what it is not two jagged holes cut for eyes so that nothing inside gets unnoticed by your ever suffocating scrutiny. but if if you arranged it with curls on top and told it to smile you know you might even think it pretty. ok, I said no more but I lied, got too much inside that I haven't let out....sorry to give it to you all to read..... [This message has been edited by fc (edited 01-19-2000).] |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Sweetheart...if you can't feel free amongst those of us here that understand the boundaries of pain and the freedom of love and the way in which we all try to be brave and strong when feeling defeated...and then to feel the love that comes back in tidal waves to envelope you and try to make you see that you are indeed special as each and everyone of us are, then I know of nowhere else to go to be able to run with how you are, now, this minute, except perhaps a place where you would grow wings and that isn't for you, not now and not for a long time...cause I need you in my life as well! HUSG< !signature--> Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn. [This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 01-19-2000).] |
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fc Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 130 |
thank you rainbow I need you too....I will come out of this... just held on to a dream and pretended too long that nothing was wrong.....gotta get it out of me before I can heal.....hugs back....be patient with me, sweet friend [This message has been edited by fc (edited 01-19-2000).] |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Well, you're certainly getting it out in style. This writing is superb, to say the least. If you can use any help, you're at the right place, fc. We are here for you. |
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fc Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 130 |
not much anyone can do to right now...thanks for the offer though [This message has been edited by fc (edited 01-19-2000).] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh hun...no one should ever be forced to be something they are not...no one should be made to feel like they aren't worthy of someones love. If he doesn't like you as you are, he certainly doesn't love you. This poem is so well written, but yet so sad.  (((HUGS))) At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet. ~Plato |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
I think you should change your name to BH instead of fc... (Brave Heart!) Keep writing it out... you heal yourself and others too.. |
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fc Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 130 |
thanks hoot and LR....and smiles@BH just hope you all don't get tired of this seemingly endless stream of emotions....don't know where they are coming from, they just pour out....sigh |
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JTF Member
since 1999-08-09
Posts 319France |
FC, you are not talking about a bondage outfit are you ? ... ooooops, wrong forum Frog, wrong forum !! |
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fc Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 130 |
I know you said it in humor, but the odd thing is in a way, yes I am...or I should say yes, that is the way he makes me feel....sigh..... am out of here til next time...thanks all |
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