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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
The way I see life it's not so bad when the bills are paid and you have your health, weathers clear so the sky is blue and I'm working outside in the afternoon when it came to mind that all people don't see their jobs and their lives the same as me. It's just my point of view, the way that I see, life through my eyes and it's only for me not for you to agree, it's just my point of view. The way I see the earth it's a real mess, coast to coast to coast East and West, we are killing all the animals destroying the land, people are going hungry we should all lend a hand, most wish they could but the rich don't understand. It's just my point of view, way that I see, life through my eyes and it's only for me, not for you to agree it's just my point of view. The way I see myself I'm a pretty nice guy, landscape all I can just trying to get by. Ask me to go sailing just give me a minute to put down my guitar we'll drive down and get in it. I love the outdoors the mountains or seas but I really love my wife she's most precious to me. It's just my point of view, way that I see, life through my eyes, and it's only for me not for you to agree, it's just my point of view. SnglDad stirred me to dig deep into the archives to retrieve this Thanks SnglDad! |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Paul, another lyrical piece from you...very nicely written. I enjoyed this! Claire |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I can see you with your guitar, a far away dreamey look in your eyes, singing this. Very lyrical. I can almost hear the melody in my mind. In the dew of little things, the heart finds its morning and is refreshed. (ee cummings) |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I tend to like your point of view....nice one  |
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SnglDad Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 115Seattle area |
Great piece Paul Im glad that you have brought back out front for all us new people to read. And your welcome Thanx Again and God Bless Joel |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Paul , this is great , I like your point of view , Wonderful poem |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Paul, what a wonderful point of view. Very well written. Liked this very much. |
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A Friend New Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 7 |
I agree with all of the above. Nice Piece |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
Thanks you are all too kind. This one actually started out with the melody first and is kind of fun, acoustically speaking, unfortunatley, I can't sing, so they all sound better if I just read them. |
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One Who Understands Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 251Cedar Rapids, Iowa |
I love to see others think the same as me |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Paul- Did you post this one when you first joined??? I don't remember seeing it!! Glad I caught it this time around...nice point of view by the way!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Paul, God couldn't have picked a better one to see life through your eyes! Superb writing! <*\\\>< Where there is faith, there is love. Where there is love, there is peace. Where there is peace, there is GOD. Where there is GOD, there is no need. Hallmark |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
What a wonderful point of view!! Great imagery in this and we should all be so blessed. Your wife is a very blessed (in my point of view LOL) Great read!! Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream. Shawna R. Holder Boise, Idaho |
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