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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2000-01-19 01:36 AM


A Time For Us
~Marge Tindal~


The
time is
now
The way
somehow
A time
and
a place
for our love

The garnering
of a love
so rare
so pure
so wanted
so needed
so loved

A
time
for
us
~
The
time
is
now

A
time
for
us
someplace
somehow






 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


© Copyright 2000 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
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1 posted 2000-01-19 01:47 AM


What a presentation   Lovely

Happens to be my favorite song from Westside Story
*singing* Somewhere there's a place for us
A time and space for us.....
oh geez....I think I cracked my computer screen...lol


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SnglDad
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2 posted 2000-01-19 01:48 AM






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3 posted 2000-01-19 01:52 AM


What I want to know is, when the Passions Poetry book eventually comes out and becomes a best seller, will the technology by there to have rotating bracelets on a paper page?   I enjoyed this.

Mike

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4 posted 2000-01-19 02:37 AM


It doesn't matter mike, because this poem can stand on it's own quite well!

 "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot


First__Knight
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5 posted 2000-01-19 02:39 AM


Work of art again Marge.  You should charge a viewing fee  

LOL at you Ruth

 Drive it like you stole it...LOL And another thing...When I rev my engine I want people to think the world is coming to a end....hehehe


Dark Angel
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6 posted 2000-01-19 04:27 AM


Beautiful Marge, absolutely!!  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2000-01-19 07:46 AM


Ruth-
What a 'HOOT' !
Sing it, gal !
Thanks for liking this well enough to break into song ... and speaking of breaking ...
sorry 'bout your computer screen !  LOL !

SnglDad-
Thank you.

Mike-

Wouldn't it be LOVERLY ?

PASSIONS IN POETRY


Saxoness-
Thank you for liking the content.

First_Knight-
Thanks.
We gladly accept Visa, Master Card, American Express, Discover, Money Order, Cashier Checks, Personal Checks or YOUR PIGGY BANK !

Dark Angel-
I absolute thank you !

~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


Danny Holloway
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8 posted 2000-01-19 12:44 PM


I would pay the viewing fee suggested by First_Knight.  Worth it!
DH

 

Martie
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9 posted 2000-01-19 01:07 PM


Oh Marge, what a sweet and tender love song.
Nan
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10 posted 2000-01-19 05:34 PM


Any lyrical work reminiscent of "West Side Story" will get the best of me.... I concede...
Sonny
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11 posted 2000-01-19 07:11 PM


What an inspiring piece - full of hope with a neverending desire to be together regardless of whatever obstacles may appear.  Very uplifting.

Sonny

Denise
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12 posted 2000-01-19 07:46 PM


WOW! I too love the poem and the presentation!! Great job, Marge!  
Marge Tindal
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13 posted 2000-01-19 08:10 PM


Danny-
Well, thanks so much.
(Great idea, First_Knight)
UPS delivers on Saturday ...
send piggy banks !  

Martie-
How sweet of you.  
I'm forever singing and surprisingly (or maybe not)
many of them turn into my poems.  
Actually, singing them is a way for me to remember them until I can get home to pen them.  I'm so pleased that you like it.

Nan-
Inspiration found on every corner.

Eastside, Westside
Graffiti on the wall.
Doesn't take much
for me to get the call.

Sonny-
Thanks.  The ~circling~ of love and friendship
that turns us to one another is a lovely quest.  
Nothing lifts us higher than loving another.

Denise-
Thanks for that outstanding WOW !
I greatly enjoy the toys Ron has given
us to play with.  (like you can't tell)

Love to you ALL !
~*Marge*~




 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


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14 posted 2000-01-19 09:52 PM


Margie, once again you have run rings around the rest of us!  
Marge Tindal
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15 posted 2000-01-19 09:59 PM


Oh, Balladeer-
What a sweetheart you are !
Thank you, love.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


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