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Kevin

Senior Member

since 1999-11-02

Posts 729
Torrington, Ct, Usa

0 posted 2000-01-19 12:46 PM

Once upon a realized dream
I found such beauty calling
with stable mind, it still does seem
that deep in love I’m falling.

for through the hurt of tragic past
I fell upon her eyes.
and knew that love would soon outlast
the stars in heavens skies.

Each second I can’t feel her touch
I want her all the more
there are no words that say how much
she has me longing for.

Our bodies crave to soon fulfill
what souls already found.
Not time, nor place, can break our will
for soon fate comes around.

mlv

[This message has been edited by Kevin (edited 01-19-2000).]

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2000-01-19 12:54 PM

Kevin-

This is sooooooo beautiful.
I mean it is REALLY beautiful
What a lovely piece of your heart !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

2 posted 2000-01-19 12:55 PM

Kevin...this is wonderful, your feelings shine through so clearly, beautiful my young poet friend

Kevin

Senior Member

since 1999-11-02

Posts 729
Torrington, Ct, Usa

3 posted 2000-01-19 12:58 PM

marge,
hoot
thanks you two(too) our beautiful hehe
NOW GO TO BED

thats where im headed night'

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

4 posted 2000-01-19 01:03 AM

I agree, Kevin, this is just so beautiful...and love can be that, can't it?!

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

5 posted 2000-01-19 01:36 AM

Great poem. I wish you the best.

Mike

SnglDad
Member

since 2000-01-08

Posts 115
Seattle area

6 posted 2000-01-19 01:54 AM

Your a natural

You`ve done a great job here Kevin.
I look at your picture and you look very young but I read your writings and I see
a Very Mature Young Man.
Thanx for sharing and God Bless

Joel

Kevin

Senior Member

since 1999-11-02

Posts 729
Torrington, Ct, Usa

7 posted 2000-01-19 04:48 PM

d, b, and dad =)

thanks for the replies..

but wishes arent needed =)

~ViXeN~
Member

since 2000-01-09

Posts 93
Guelph, Ont. Canada

8 posted 2000-01-19 10:41 PM

=)
kev, this is really beautiful! =)
i am speechless.....

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

9 posted 2000-01-19 10:54 PM

Kevin, Kevin, Kevin
It sounds like you found Heaven

Gemini
Senior Member

since 1999-12-15

Posts 1203
Wisconsin, USA

10 posted 2000-01-19 10:57 PM

Very touching and beautiful poem. Thanks.

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