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Stay for Breakfast
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Stay for Breakfast |
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Gurion New Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 8Cleveland Ohio |
Inside myself there is nothing left? Nothing left at all And in my heart which once beat hard Nothing beats at all Tell me that there is something wrong Something I can fix Don't run away from me tonight Stay for breakfast We talked all night for hours Going round and round No one screamed and no one fought But in the end we were both left down Tell me that there is something wrong Something I can fix Don't run away from me tonight Stay for breakfast Things have always been real hard Are feelings tried but true But sometimes even though you're right I will sure miss you Tell me that there is something wrong Something I can fix Don't run away from me tonight Stay and talk with me Don't run away from me tonight Stay for breakfast |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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I enjoyed this! I thought the repetition of 'stay for breakfast' worked well... Denise And slight is the sting of his trouble Whose winnings are less than his worth; For he who is honest is noble, Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~ |
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