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I'll remember...... |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) 
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If I had only known You always tried to brighten my life To show me the silver lining in the darkest of clouds Painted my dreams beautifully before my eyes Bringing me to giggles when I cried There to comfort me in the darkest of nights Holding me so gently when I wanted to die Never giving up when everyone else would Understanding in that odd, peculiar, sweet sort of way All of my silly, eccentric, strange talks and ways **This is short and sweet* |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sometimes we can't see things when they are right in front of our face! It is so easy to take the ones who love us and who we love for granted...very nice poem, Bridgette! Denise And slight is the sting of his trouble Whose winnings are less than his worth; For he who is honest is noble, Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
This is very sweet and tender. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Bridgette...short and sweet, but oh so important. I only hope you shared this with the person it was written for and brightened their day like you have brightened ours  |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
I have to echo everyone above, this is definately short and sweet...and says SO much! May I never be too busy to help another's load, Then I'll be drinking from the saucer 'cause my cup has overflowed. --Author Unknown |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
love it! "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Do you by chance miss someone? I agree with Ruth share this with them. It is very good and tells much Drive it like you stole it...LOL And another thing...When I rev my engine I want people to think the world is coming to a end....hehehe |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JustBleu- A beautiful poem to be shared. Thank you for sharing it with us. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sonny Junior Member
since 1999-12-18
Posts 29Schenectady, NY, USA |
JustBleu - What a sweet poem! It is those little things in life that one gives to another without thought - just instinct - that makes a relationship so special. Thank you for bringing a big smile to my face. Sonny [This message has been edited by Sonny (edited 01-19-2000).] |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Nice done 'bleu |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Short and sweet, just the way I like it. Nice poem! Nathan |
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