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simplyYRREHS
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since 2000-01-03
Posts 162


0 posted 2000-01-18 09:47 AM


It never would occur to me
On any given day
That words spoken so carelessly
Could cause someone to stray

From their beliefs
From their convictions
From their personal points of view

From their emotions
From their happiness
From all havens they once knew

It never would occur to me
At any given time
That actions spoken wrecklessly
Could cause someone to find

A different belief
A different conviction
A different path for each to follow

A different emotion
A different happiness
A different emptiness in which to wallow

Words sometimes speak less of actions
But either one will do.
The power lies in what we preach
And in morals we wish to construe.

You never know when someone's listening
Or watching so intensely.
So be careful what you say and do
'Cause it could affect someone emensely.

Guide with all your deepest truths
But none above the rest.
Offer wisdom from experience
And help others become their best.


 "Heaven is under our feet as well as over our heads." ~Henry David Thoreau


© Copyright 2000 Sherry - All Rights Reserved
Nate Dogg
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since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton
1 posted 2000-01-18 10:22 AM


Wonderful words of wisdom simply. I will surely keep those in mind. Great poem!

 Nathan

whiskey
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since 1999-12-28
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2 posted 2000-01-18 10:46 AM


I Agree very wise words, wonderful poem enjoyed very much

Julie

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
3 posted 2000-01-18 11:38 AM


APPLAUDS!!!! Very sound advice   and well crafted!!!
Denise
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4 posted 2000-01-18 11:50 AM


Ditto! More people should be more aware of the words they say....they are indeed powerful! And so is what they 'do'! Actions can speak louder than words!  Great poem!< !signature-->

 Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~



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Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
5 posted 2000-01-18 12:01 PM


There are some good lessons in your words for all to read.  Provided they survive the filters of insensitivity.  Thanks for sharing.
DH

simplyYRREHS
Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 162

6 posted 2000-01-18 01:20 PM


Thanks for the kind words.  This was truly a product of the differences in opinions I have viewed in this forum as of late.  Words, as proven online, move people.  And in our "real" daily life away from the computer, our actions do the same.  How important to be sure to provide the best for those around us, in our speech and our doings.  Glad you enjoyed.

  Sherry< !signature-->

 "Heaven is under our feet as well as over our heads." ~Henry David Thoreau




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Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
7 posted 2000-01-18 01:21 PM


I wish soooo very much that I would have had such wisdom in my past....words spoken nor careless actions can never be taken back!!!  You are very wise in this from what I read here today!!!  These thoughts are sooo very true...one action...one word can change the future!!  So I agree you all who read this please learn to be careful what you say and do!!!  I am about to cry....

Thank You
Take Care
Bridgette

SnglDad
Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 115
Seattle area
8 posted 2000-01-18 05:50 PM


Uh O,
Did I do Dat?
I very much agree with this.
You have once again givin me something to think about.
Ya know like my Mom use to always tell me,
Think before you speak...lol
You`ve done a great job here Sherry.
Keep up the writing Sherry  

simplyYRREHS
Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 162

9 posted 2000-01-19 07:30 AM


OH what the forum will inspire you to write!  Thanks for all the kind comments, friends.  Sngl Dad ~ I supposed this is just a universal "mommy" thing, not implied for you, dear...    Just venting on an issue.  Glad you liked.

Sherry

 "Heaven is under our feet as well as over our heads." ~Henry David Thoreau



Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
10 posted 2000-01-19 10:41 AM


Sherry
Words of wisdom from your poet pen
May save me from mis-speaking again
Thanks for the well written reminder
Liz

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