Open Poetry #5 |
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To A Friend |
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White Wolf Member
since 1999-09-18
Posts 371Somewhere in the vast wasteland |
Well I am back. Had a lousy time but here is one to get me started again. To A Friend My love for you is unimaginable Like the ocean has for the shore Only less forceful Like a plant has for water Only more so Like the planets have for the sun Only greater It sustains me when I am broken It gives me life when I am dying It hangs on when I let go It helps me up when I fall With a love like this All of my fears are driven away With a friend like you I am more complete Thank you for being my friend "Life's greatest mystery isn't the meaning of life. To love and be loved is the meaning of life. Now how to attain those is the greatest mystery of all." |
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whiskey![]()
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
This is lovely its great to have friends like this , great poem ![]() |
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simplyYRREHS Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 162 |
I adore this poem! Friends are so very important...and few are those who can be spoken of the way you have written. What a wonderful creation, and if it is okay with you, I would like to share with one of my very special friends. ![]() "Heaven is under our feet as well as over our heads." ~Henry David Thoreau |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Friends is good...always good... make new friends but keep the old.. one is silver and the other gold.. Nice work ![]() |
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White Wolf Member
since 1999-09-18
Posts 371Somewhere in the vast wasteland |
Thank you all. Sherry and anyone else, this poem was written for friends. So if you have a friend you would like to share this with. You have my permission to do so. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I really do like this poem....you can tell from it that your friends are very important to you!! This made me think something....one can also find strength, warmth, comfort, or wisdom through a mere stranger who only sees you once and has very few words for you!! Keep on writing....you do it well!!! Take Care Bridgette |
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