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I thought you knew me
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I thought you knew me |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
I know I need to let go of you. I'm trying to resist temtations from the bottom of my heart that has been hit. You made me feel alive again, what was it that we had? You held me then, and cried with me, I melted in your hands. I trusted you, not only when, my life was very plain, I gave you parts I hadn't seen in all my years of pain. I want to go running to the person that I found. But, I know, I'll only see a person who is bound. What do you see? I thought I knew. I didn't really look. I opened up my heart to you You squished it in your book. |
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amber Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 240los banos, ca, |
So sure that i have been here before and remember this feeling so well! beautiful poem, thank you for bringing it back to me! |
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White Wolf Member
since 1999-09-18
Posts 371Somewhere in the vast wasteland |
Heartfelt. Drew me in and let me know how it was for you. Very good. "Life's greatest mystery isn't the meaning of life. To love and be loved is the meaning of life. Now how to attain those is the greatest mystery of all." |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
I hate the feeling of being sucked in and then squished!!! |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Ouch that sounds painful....it makes me hurt to know I did something such as this to someone special, not meaning to!!! Well written....it came across quite well!! Hang in There and Take Care Bridgette |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
Thanks, Bridgette. I hope your friend made it o.k.? |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tulip- Longlingly nice. Well said and pretty. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
Thank you Marge. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
The big squash...ouch! Like the way this was done! <*\\\>< Where there is faith, there is love. Where there is love, there is peace. Where there is peace, there is GOD. Where there is GOD, there is no need. Hallmark |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh I'm so sorry  |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
I'm trying to take it as a learning experience. I opened up way too quickly, because I really believed we had something special. Next time, I'll take things a little slower. |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
O.k. guys, He returned momentarily after disappearing for quite some time...What does that mean? tulip- |
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