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I lost my love Today
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I lost my love Today |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
I lost my love today -------------------- I lost my love today I am very sad to say I seen her walk right by with another at her side I lost my love this week and now I never sleep I seen them in the park where we loved once in the dark I lost my love this year and I can not stop the tears I seen her glance at me and she did not even see.... I saw my love go by and Im sure I seen her cry I know what she would say She lost her love today. James Parker Haley (Jan 2000) |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I wish love was never lost...this brought a tear to my eyes!! Hope all is well!!! Thank You!! Nice work!! Take Care Bridgette |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
A little bit of Karma I see in this coming back your love. Still, I'd be willing to bet it still hurt you seeing her crying, even after all that. Good poem. Michael |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Thanks Bridgette, Everytime I read it, its a sad reminder. Michael, you are right, it does hurt, even more when you can't be there for her. Thanks. Parker |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
I've found you to be so genuinely caring and sensitive, I can't beleive anyone could treat you this way  James, you will find your true love one day...psstt...my fingers are crossed for you  HUGS hun!!Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very sad, James  Denise And slight is the sting of his trouble Whose winnings are less than his worth; For he who is honest is noble, Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~ |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
James, you've written the sadness right into this poem. Claire |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
devina, thanks I'll take those hugs, and raise it, with a sweet little kiss on the cheek.  Thanks Denise, I loved that verse you added, about nobility. Meadowmuse, thanks I think it more about my emotions then trying to write a good poem. |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Very sad I do agree Couldn't you just talk and see? See that she felt the same way I wonder what she would say A nice poem your wrote but yes it's sad The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
James, this is saddening, emotional, yet beautiful. *hugs* to you ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
SO sad |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Thanks Helmut, Echo, Hoot, I really didn't want to make everybody sad. Endings bring new beginnings, and sad endings bring poetry. Parker |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
lovely but so sad... tracie |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
I agree that it is sad but so well wrought in that sadness. Wonderful post!! Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream. Shawna R. Holder Boise, Idaho |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Thanks Tracie and WildChild I'm glad you like the poem. Parker |
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