Open Poetry #5 |
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Spanish Moss |
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Sunshine
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Spanish Moss Deep, buried deep down, dark, dank, ground musty leaves and Spanish moss hanging ‘round, a treasured chest, buried alone, call it home, buried deep down, where thoughts ne’er roam. Within cavernous wood and green ironed lock lie undisturbed pink silk of young girl’s frock, amidst linen doll, ball of yarn, a lonesome key; lies deep, dark, dank, the hidden heart of thee. With the razing of the land, hands uncover treasured chest, left alone after loss of lover; discounted, forgotten moments unburied now come again to grips with sunlight’s vow. For sunlight saw forbidden love high above, tears fallen, curses rambled, treasured chest shoved deep, buried deep down, dark, dank, ground musty leaves and Spanish moss hanging ‘round. Perhaps a hundred or more years ago a lover loved, lost, despaired so; then treasured chest carried there once buried deep, dark, bereft of air; …with only Spanish moss to mourn. 17 January, 2000 ©KRJ Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I've got goosebumps. Spanish moss was such a part of my youth, time spent in South Carolina, but much of it has gone. This is a beautiful story, a beautiful poem. Now I'm trying to get rid of the goosebumps Liz |
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Sunshine
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Elizabeth, I thank you for sharing goosebump feelings... Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
I see and I agree Thus haunting goosebums I feel Soecially now those feelings are so real This is a very special poem to me Thank you sunshine Karma is a fine thing The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Definetly goosebumps....! ...."with only Spanish moss to mourn." Haunting and beautiful.... A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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Sunshine
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Helmut, stay tuned for more Karma Pepper - haunting says it all. Thank you for coming in to read...I have NO idea where this came from but I'm glad it came to me... Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
How can my sunshine have caught, This deep, down, dank of thought And such a wonderful poem have wrought? One of your best. *L* Sy |
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Denise
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I'm glad it came to you too, Sunshine, and I share the 'goosebumps'! Excellent! ![]() Denise And slight is the sting of his trouble Whose winnings are less than his worth; For he who is honest is noble, Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~ |
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Sunshine
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Sy, my muse I never question, thank you so much for the "best"... denise, perhaps I should try my hand at more goosebump pieces, thank you!< !signature--> Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 01-18-2000).] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wow...never will I look at spanish moss the same again!! |
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Sunshine
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I have found it quite interesting, Hoot, to see what this picture has conjured up. Thank you so much for your comment. Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Posts 22676with you |
off to see the new and improved! ![]() |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
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Posts 45577displaced |
um....wow |
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