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Open Poetry #5

mamma if i forgot

Terri Madrid
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since 2000-01-15

Posts 8

0 posted 2000-01-17 12:27 PM

Mamma, your hands so cold and frail, how i miss your warmth.

Mamma, your eyes so focused on long past, difficult to vison upon the present.

Mamma your legs no longer stand upright, how i miss the days of strength.

through the years everpassing i see your failing health, but MAMMA,

Your love for me grows even unto this day, a never ceasing love.

Mamma if i forgot to tell you today, thank you for loving me. I love you

Anne
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since 1999-12-31

Posts 78

1 posted 2000-01-17 12:37 PM

So touching and sincere--Thank you for sharing this!

Astraea
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since 1999-11-09

Posts 378
California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now

2 posted 2000-01-17 12:38 PM

Simple, loving and very touching. Nice.

~Astraea

"Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 2000-01-17 12:39 PM

We should say that everyday for as long as we can! Beautiful sentiments, Terri!!

Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~

Echo Rhayne
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since 1999-09-17

Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA

4 posted 2000-01-18 03:45 PM

how very sweet and loving!!

~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

5 posted 2000-01-19 12:20 PM

Oh, this is so sweet and so sincere, never forget to tell her

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

6 posted 2000-01-20 05:28 AM

You have written something that was very touching....My grandmother passed away last year at the age of 86 and she still worried so much about my mum right up until then..something about being a mother you still worry even when your children are grown. loving poem

Tracie

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