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catslair
Junior Member

since 2000-01-16

Posts 48

0 posted 2000-01-17 12:26 PM

MY ENIGMA

Are you real, my enigma
You weren’t here just a moment ago
Yet somehow in my thoughts
I felt you were never far away
Your dreamy existence
Your faceless expression
Your gentle presence
What caused it to transform into bone and flesh
What star upon did I once wish
That struck a chord in your heart
And made it dance with mine
Oh enigma, my enigma
How could I have ever doubted
That we’d find each other again
For eternal commitment
Lives through space and time
“Hello” seems grossly inappropriate
In such an exchange as this
Strangely pure
Strangely familiar
Strangely enigmatic
My enigma
Yet even stranger still
For as I reach out to take your hand in mine
The alarm goes off with a shrill!

Rus Bowden
Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 139

1 posted 2000-01-17 12:33 PM

hi catlair,

ah, but the enigma has meaning! good one!

i'm new here, but it says "member" next to my name. welcome "new member" please post more.

rus

Astraea
Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 378
California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now

2 posted 2000-01-17 12:34 PM

Welcome to Passions! And such a lovely enigma indeed! Nice.

~Astraea

"Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 2000-01-17 12:35 PM

Welcome to Passions, Catslair! Beautiful poem and I loved the ending!! Check your email for a special welcome!

Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~

Eloise
Senior Member

since 1999-11-27

Posts 1096
Wyoming

4 posted 2000-01-17 12:37 PM

What a great first piece cats lair. Welcome to Passions. I'm sure you will enjoy your stay.

devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

5 posted 2000-01-17 04:51 AM

Your word usage is amazing, I think you knocked me down with this one!!! In other words..I liked it alot

Welcome to passions, you've made your entrance well!!!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

6 posted 2000-01-17 06:02 AM

Welcome to Passions catslair, this is a beautiful poem, absolutley wonderful!!

What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge

catslair
Junior Member

since 2000-01-16

Posts 48

7 posted 2000-01-17 06:40 AM

thankyou all for the welcome.........it does mean a lot.........

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2000-01-17 07:21 AM

Jeepers, CatsLair-
This is a wonderful entrance into
the world of Passion's poets.
We will look for more from you.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

9 posted 2000-01-17 09:28 AM

What a wonderful entrance, I like this alot

Ill look forward to reading more of your work

catslair
Junior Member

since 2000-01-16

Posts 48

10 posted 2000-01-19 10:05 PM

thanks for all the great response...yes it is very welcoming....

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

11 posted 2000-01-20 09:48 AM

Oh...I like, welcome to passions

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