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Open Poetry #5

Follow My Heart

Eloise
Senior Member

since 1999-11-27

Posts 1096
Wyoming

0 posted 2000-01-16 11:59 PM

From the way things were going
I knew from the start,
That all would work out
If I followed my heart.

As our silent dreams unfold
We find that we are bound,
By the beating of our hearts
Conversing without sound.

These hearts that beat in rhythm
Is the start of something new.
I hear the velvet whispers
And I know you hear it too.

[This message has been edited by Eloise (edited 01-17-2000).]

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

1 posted 2000-01-17 12:04 PM

I believe I have experienced this before and it's wonderful!! Nice Poem!!

Take Care
Bridgette

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2000-01-17 12:08 PM

Eloise-

'bound by the beating of our hearts'
I like that.
This is very, very pretty.
~*Marge*~

Eloise
Senior Member

since 1999-11-27

Posts 1096
Wyoming

3 posted 2000-01-17 12:14 PM

Yes, it is Bridgette. Thank you.

Marge, thank you so much.

catslair
Junior Member

since 2000-01-16

Posts 48

4 posted 2000-01-17 12:14 PM

for the people this is about.......they are very lucky to have this great blessing....
and you have expressed it in a beautiful way..
thanks

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

5 posted 2000-01-17 12:17 PM

Velvet whispers .... that's really nice, Eloise! Beautiful poem!

Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~

Eloise
Senior Member

since 1999-11-27

Posts 1096
Wyoming

6 posted 2000-01-17 01:18 AM

Thank you cats lair and Denise. Appreciate your comments.

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

7 posted 2000-01-17 07:31 AM

Following my heart sometimes led to disaster
Then why do I still do it?. I still think it's the right way to go
I like this poem
Liz

whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

8 posted 2000-01-17 09:24 AM

This is great Eloise , Wonderful poem

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