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RobertB
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0 posted 2000-01-16 08:35 AM


The Old House


I'm back at the old house,
though perhaps I really never left,
with it's large rooms
and attic full of relics
from lives having been lived
to the fullest
becoming only a memory
to the caretakers of the antiques.

I'm back at the old house
on a winter morning
looking through the frosted windows
huddled over the furnace grate
listening to Grandma in the kitchen
cooking, planning....our culinary day.

I'm back at the old house
because I never wanted
to leave behind
memories of my life
on a table in the attic.
So the old house still stands
and always will
in my mind.


Robert



 if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.


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Elizabeth Santos
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1 posted 2000-01-16 08:39 AM


This warms my heart
Very lovely, loving poem
Liz

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2 posted 2000-01-16 12:24 PM


memories will always be treasures that we keep whether they be in boxes in an attic, or they be in our minds forever. Memories helped create the person we are today. Nice poem thanks for sharing.
Balladeer
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3 posted 2000-01-16 01:24 PM


Such a wonderful, nostalgic flavor to this, Robert. If I had anything to do with your creation of this poem, I'm very glad.
Denise
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4 posted 2000-01-16 02:04 PM


I agree! Great poem, Robert!  

 Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~


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5 posted 2000-01-16 02:08 PM


RobertB-

Between you and Balladeer, you've got
me all nostalgic.  I have three cedar chests that hold just a small portion of 'me' from yesteryear.  All the rest is .. in spread
all through the house.  I visit with the memories everyday.  What joy !

Great rendering.
~*Marge*~

 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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RobertB
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6 posted 2000-01-16 03:34 PM


Thanks to all. I wrote this awhile back Balladeer, but your poem brought it back to mind so I posted it as a response. I have to thank you for the reminder.

Marge, I love cedar chests. I'll come over some winter day and we can sift through memories and drink hot tea!!!

Robert

Martie
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7 posted 2000-01-16 03:42 PM


Robert this poem was a wonder of sweet and revered memory--I have, like Marge a treasure of years spread across my house.  Hot tea?    

 In the dew of little things,
the heart finds its morning
and is refreshed.
(ee cummings)

Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2000-01-16 04:09 PM


RobertB,
Interesting read enjoyed.

Nan
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9 posted 2000-01-17 07:53 AM


The two of you are nearly making me pick up a pen and write about "the last house on the left"....hehe
Nice work, RB...

RobertB
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10 posted 2000-01-17 08:06 AM


Thanks you Seymour.....Nan...pick up that pen!! You're off today!!!! lol

Robert

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