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whiskey
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0 posted 2000-01-15 07:54 PM


" Love is that feeling "

Love is that feeling
Deep down in side
Love is that feeling
The one there that hides

Love is that feeling
Of warmth from within
Love is that feeling
That draws you in

Love is that feeling
Anothers soul
Love is that feeling
Never wanting to go

Love is that feeling
A smile upon face
Love is that feeling
Gives you your grace

Love is that feeling
Only two can share
Love is that feeling
Of having him near

Love is that feeling
That kiss given
Love is that feeling
That keeps you living

Love is that feeling
I feel inside me
Love is that feeling
That helps me to be

Love is that feeling
You shared your whole
Love is that feeling
In holy bowl




[This message has been edited by whiskey (edited 01-15-2000).]

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Astraea
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1 posted 2000-01-15 09:32 PM


Lovely.

~Astraea

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."


Denise
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2 posted 2000-01-15 09:44 PM


This is beautiful, Whiskey! I'd say challenge well met!

 Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~


Paul Hoekman
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3 posted 2000-01-15 09:59 PM


Ladies and Gentlemen,
in the center ring
one of the forums
all time best,
look high,
look low,
it's Whiskey,
watch her words flow.

Earthman(Paul)

Rus Bowden
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since 2000-01-13
Posts 139

4 posted 2000-01-16 01:28 AM


hi whiskey,

what a nice verse!  you must be in love  

Love is that feeling
That helps me to be


rus

SnglDad
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 115
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5 posted 2000-01-16 03:25 AM


Another one that`s very well written.
Love must be in the air?
Thanx for sharing Whiskey  

whiskey
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6 posted 2000-01-16 04:38 AM


Thank you Everyone  Your all so Kind

Thanks Paul That was great  

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