Open Poetry #5 |
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Love is that feeling (posted as reply to StephenJ's challenge) |
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whiskey![]()
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia ![]() |
" Love is that feeling " Love is that feeling Deep down in side Love is that feeling The one there that hides Love is that feeling Of warmth from within Love is that feeling That draws you in Love is that feeling Anothers soul Love is that feeling Never wanting to go Love is that feeling A smile upon face Love is that feeling Gives you your grace Love is that feeling Only two can share Love is that feeling Of having him near Love is that feeling That kiss given Love is that feeling That keeps you living Love is that feeling I feel inside me Love is that feeling That helps me to be Love is that feeling You shared your whole Love is that feeling In holy bowl [This message has been edited by whiskey (edited 01-15-2000).] |
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Astraea Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now |
Lovely. ~Astraea "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness." "Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things." |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Whiskey! I'd say challenge well met! Denise And slight is the sting of his trouble Whose winnings are less than his worth; For he who is honest is noble, Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~ |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
Ladies and Gentlemen, in the center ring one of the forums all time best, look high, look low, it's Whiskey, watch her words flow. Earthman(Paul) |
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Rus Bowden Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 139 |
hi whiskey, what a nice verse! you must be in love ![]() That helps me to be rus |
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SnglDad Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 115Seattle area |
Another one that`s very well written. Love must be in the air? Thanx for sharing Whiskey ![]() |
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whiskey![]()
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Thank you Everyone ![]() Thanks Paul That was great ![]() |
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