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Field full of flowers
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Field full of flowers |
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Roger Leewright Junior Member
since 1999-09-25
Posts 28Beaverton, OR.USA |
Field full of flowers I lie you down slowly, in a field full of flowers, The mist is rising up, from the mornings showers. Your eyes reflect clearly, the color of the sky, A rainbow above, for just you and I. A gentle breeze puts the flowers to dance, Setting the rhythm for our romance. Birds singing softly, melodies of love, White fluffy clouds, glide slowly above. Blossoms fall gently from an old apple tree, And come to rest softly, all around you and me. Your honey scented hair, so soft and so sweet, I kiss your red lips, what a fine candied treat. Like fine woven silk, your skin I must touch, Your my fantasy come true, God, I want you so much. So simple am I to deserve all your pleasure, The love you give now, I will always treasure. Simply put, you are an angel to me, I want to show the world, I want them to see! "I am the one", I will shout from the towers, That you wish to lie down with, in a field full of flowers. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Roger- I like this very much. Can just smell the grasses and the flowers in the field you've chosen. Beautifully written. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Roger, this piece returns me to my meadow... Liked it very much...  Claire |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Roger, You created a spell and did it well. Enjoyed the read. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Ah, how very lovely this piece... A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wow! You did create a spell with this, Roger! So beautifully romantic! Wonderful!  Denise And slight is the sting of his trouble Whose winnings are less than his worth; For he who is honest is noble, Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~ |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
wonderful poem. Such a great flow of thoughts. |
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Rus Bowden Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 139 |
Hi Roger, You've created quite the scene here. A marvelous verse to read. Rus |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a beautiful write |
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