Open Poetry #5 |
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Death Of A Rose |
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jaxjoy Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 112Texas |
Death Of A Rose Sometimes The swirl of a brush stroke can appear to be that of a rose And YOU whose petals I can never touch whose fragrance I can never intoxicate myself with Were my rose The rose whose thorn stays embedded in my heart A constant reminder of this pain and passion My blood as red as YOU My Rose |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
This is very beautiful! ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
This was written with pain and passion...nice job. The emotions are very crisp. I checked out your website. You should post "I Myself Believe In Rain". I thought it to be excellent ![]() It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain |
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jaxjoy Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 112Texas |
Thank you for your comments. I appreciate the replies. Perhaps I will post "I Myself Believe In Rain" next..thanks Caroline |
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whiskey![]()
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
wonderful poem, very beautiful ![]() |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wonderful poem! Denise |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Very passionate indeed... and welcome to Passions jaxjoy! ![]() ...I am not a painter, I am a poet... F. O'Hara |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
caroline, how did you find jaxjoy's website? I would like to visit it too! |
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Betty Gravitt Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 222Georgia United States |
Wonderful poem. I know what you fell. (((Hugs))) B Gravitt |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JaxJoy - Very nice, indeed. Also enjoyed your site. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Oh how I feel the emotions in this......I am left feeling so sad. Thank you it is very nice ![]() I have learned that the pain of a lost love will fade, But the memory of having loved will last forever. |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Awesome! Beautiful and POWERFUL! I like this much, I do, I do! |
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jaxjoy Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 112Texas |
Thank you all for your beautiful words. I was feeling a little down this morning. Thanks for the uplifting ![]() ![]() |
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