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Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

0 posted 1999-12-28 06:26 PM

We have an extra special love,
One almost holy it's true,
And although we can never be together,
My heart belongs to you.

We can liken ourselves to Catherine and Vincent,
From the TV Series Beauty and the Beast,
Like them we will never be together,
But never far apart to say the least.

A love so pure and strong,
Built on kindred hearts and minds,
I know this fact until my dying day,
No better relationship I will find.

I escape into the words we write,
We have our little visit everyday,
A love like ours has survived much already,
It will never tarnish or fade away.

So my love when you are sad and alone,
Feeling pain or misunderstood,
Know my heart, it feels your pain,
And I'd kiss away the tears if I could.

So we'll close our eyes and be together again,
On a windswept hill,
We'll draw strength and love from each other,
Until we've had our fill.

I'm always there hon, just a heartbeat away,
A love as this is so rare,
A precious miracle to hold onto,
Tonight I'll close my eyes and you'll be there.

I send my heart oh kindred soul,
Your love has already saved me,
With you I am finally whole,
We'll always be together, your soul is always with me.

At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet. (Plato)
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

Echo Rhayne
Senior Member

since 1999-09-17

Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA

1 posted 1999-12-28 06:35 PM

This is beautiful, Isis!

~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

Tamera
Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 121

2 posted 1999-12-28 07:44 PM

Beautiful words, well done!

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 1999-12-28 08:42 PM

Beautiful poem, Isis.

Denise

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

4 posted 1999-12-28 10:05 PM

Thanks but I'm not that happy with it

At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet. (Plato)
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

5 posted 1999-12-29 05:45 AM

Isis - this is one of the most beautiful poems I have read from you - what do you mean you're not happy with it?!

K

...I am not a painter, I am a poet... F. O'Hara

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

6 posted 1999-12-29 06:26 AM

It touched me, so it's got to be good.
I'm not that easily moved.
I guess I know what it's like to be so near and yet so far from someone
Good work, Isis

First__Knight
Senior Member

since 1999-11-08

Posts 678

7 posted 1999-12-29 06:32 AM

How much this is.....I am left stired inside. Can't explain it.... Moved me much ....Very very nice Isis.....Whish I had words to decribe it.

I have learned that the pain of a lost love will fade, But the memory of having loved will last forever.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 1999-12-29 08:07 AM

Isis,
this poem is the most heartfelt thing that I have ever read that you have written. . .

How wonderful for the man that you talk about in the poem. . . and yet, how sad. . .

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

9 posted 1999-12-29 07:05 PM

I can't say why I don't like it, it didn't feel right or finished properly to me, too critical of my own work I suppose.
Glad you all liked it.
It is a wonderful love, beautiful, something to be cherished, not sad

At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet. (Plato)
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

10 posted 1999-12-29 07:46 PM

Wonderful and beautiful

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

11 posted 1999-12-29 07:52 PM

Thanks Whiskey

At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet. (Plato)
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

12 posted 1999-12-29 10:24 PM

Isis, I'm so happy that you have found someone that makes you feel this way! I think you've done a fantastic job on this! Be happy with it, and proud!

<*\\\><
Where there is faith,
there is love.
Where there is love,
there is peace.
Where there is peace,
there is GOD.
Where there is GOD,
there is no need.

Hallmark

Balladeer

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

13 posted 1999-12-29 10:35 PM

Well, you may not be happy wit it but I'm sure the person you wrote it to is.......

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

14 posted 1999-12-29 11:29 PM

Thanks WhtDove and Balladeer

At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet. (Plato)
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

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