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VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
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Oregon

0 posted 2015-04-29 11:16 AM


Thought it looked like it could be fun to write prose or poetry on this  
Anyone want to write a sci-fy on this? http://apod.nasa.gov/apod/ap120429.html


Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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OLIAS
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since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa
1 posted 2015-05-11 04:52 AM




Gliese 867d, your image feels like home to me,
oh Vulcans forge of mystery, you subjugate of gravity,
that beating heart from body torn, febrile flesh stripped to the bone,
Tears obsidian, shed alone, but still to me you feel like home.

Is this heaven?

shoeless Joe Jackson.

VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
2 posted 2015-05-11 10:40 AM


Well done, Olias! I had a very difficult time locating this but finally clicked on the right spot.

I'm so glad I found it and was able to read your perspective on the pic. It's a fun interpretation!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

OLIAS
Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa
3 posted 2015-05-11 04:32 PM


Thank you so much for your kind words VAS,  I enjoyed the challenge

[This message has been edited by OLIAS (05-12-2015 04:41 AM).]

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