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Packratmike
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0 posted 2001-05-22 03:19 AM


You are on your death bed and somehow you realize that you have just enough breath left to say in ten words or less, something to anybody in the world (living or dead).

What would your final words be and to whom would they be spoken???*S*


Mike

[This message has been edited by Packratmike (edited 05-22-2001).]

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Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 2001-05-22 05:51 AM


The words would be for my children and they would be:

"Watch out for falling elephants."


(This has some meaning to us trust me!)


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2 posted 2001-05-22 09:18 AM


I'd say

Don't forget the turkey in the oven.  It's about done  

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee."  W.S.

Paula Finn
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missouri
3 posted 2001-05-22 12:47 PM


simply...I love you...as far as to who...that would be my boys and the man I adore
Paula Finn
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missouri
4 posted 2001-05-22 12:47 PM


simply...I love you...as far as to who...that would be my boys and the man I adore
Paula Finn
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missouri
5 posted 2001-05-22 12:47 PM


simply...I love you...as far as to who...that would be my boys and the man I adore
Paula Finn
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missouri
6 posted 2001-05-22 12:48 PM


simply...I love you...as far as to who...that would be my boys and the man I adore
Packratmike
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7 posted 2001-05-22 01:17 PM


ok,ok,ok,ok....we got the message Paula!!!(LOL)
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8 posted 2001-05-22 05:41 PM


I'd say to whoever I'm married and my children and best friends all surrounding my bed......i'd have a soft smile and gentle eyes gazing at all of them.....I'd reflect upon my life and then once I realize I only have a few seconds left and just enough breath to let loose a few words...i'd say
"This really sucks"

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9 posted 2001-05-22 06:36 PM


lol@Dopey

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee."  W.S.

Paula Finn
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missouri
10 posted 2001-05-23 02:04 AM


AAWWWWWWWWWW man...did I do that? Geesh...well hey I'm blonde...shoot me heheheh
Allan Riverwood
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11 posted 2001-05-23 09:20 AM


"I don't feel well."
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12 posted 2001-05-23 10:16 AM


ROTFLMAO@ALLAN

HAHAHA

Me?

No you can't have my first editions! They go to my cat!

K

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Arkansas
13 posted 2001-05-23 10:38 AM


This will be told to anyone within hearing:

I stashed all the money over at............................

Elizabeth
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14 posted 2001-05-23 01:34 PM


"I DON'T WANT TO DO THIS!" Spoken to anyone within hearing distance of me.
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15 posted 2001-05-23 03:43 PM


"I hate you all"
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16 posted 2001-05-23 06:07 PM


Does my hair look decent?

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee."  W.S.

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17 posted 2001-05-23 07:46 PM


"Acire, looks like I got the last laugh... h-h-hhaaaa!..." *dead*
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with you
18 posted 2001-05-23 09:49 PM


I would have to tell my kiddos I love them....and since I plan to outlive my hubby.....I'd tell him......I'll be right there........
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Lurking
19 posted 2001-05-24 10:36 AM


"I think i'm dying so, get a pen and paper"...
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20 posted 2001-05-24 01:00 PM


did I remember to turn off the oven???



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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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ireland
21 posted 2001-05-31 02:46 PM


Over my dead body you will

"difference between love and comfortis that comfort's more reliable and true
Brutal and mocking but always therea crutch for enmity's saddest glare"

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state of mind
22 posted 2001-05-31 05:32 PM


Do i have a cigarette still burning somewhere?

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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23 posted 2001-06-02 12:36 PM


"I thought the light was supposed to be white, not red...?"
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The Shores of Alone
24 posted 2001-06-02 05:01 PM


I love you, said to my granddaughters.
And, somebody take care of the cats, please..

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