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The Great Onion Junior Member
since 2008-06-05
Posts 40 |
Hi, im new here; and no i dont need help on anything really. if anyone here has a good sense of rhyming, that would be TRULEY useful to me right now. im currently working on a couple of poems some are concrete poems and some are just, well.... poems that rhyme (Mostly poems that rhyme). And I'm gonna submit one of them to a poetry contest. without help right now, one of my poems are going for a crash course. Tips would do fine too. |
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The Shadow in Blue Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493EL, Michigan |
I would suggest you post your contest poem in the Critical Analysis forum then. Their you can get some constructive comments, moreso than the other forums. Good luck, Jill JNS |
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The Great Onion Junior Member
since 2008-06-05
Posts 40 |
well thanks, i probably overexaggerated the situation a little though lol. |
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The Great Onion Junior Member
since 2008-06-05
Posts 40 |
i cant find it, can someone help me find the critical analysis forums plz? |
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The Shadow in Blue Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493EL, Michigan |
It is the first catagory under Poetry and Prose Workshops in the Main Forums. JNS |
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The Great Onion Junior Member
since 2008-06-05
Posts 40 |
Thx, you helped a lot. and plz dont laugh if my poetry sucks XD. |
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The Great Onion Junior Member
since 2008-06-05
Posts 40 |
by the way, nice job for the personality thread. i have a poem there right now if you want to see it ![]() |
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